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It was okay, not great. you need to work on your animation, humor, and story. If you can get those things down, you can be really good.
you want feedback?
It was okay, not great. you need to work on your animation, humor, and story. If you can get those things down, you can be really good.
You could've done better.
It was good, but you could've done a better job with the movement. The need to move faster in order for it to seem real. It should also be longer. I wanted to see more gun action.
I loved it!
I think this movie is great.
Good Movie
It was very good. But, I speak a bit of japanese and I can tell that some the japanese speakers weren't saying what they sub-titles were saying. That's my only problem with it, but that doesn't mean I can't give you a 10. Keep up the great work!
Cute
A cute attempt at a flash. Keep up the good work.
Hmm...
The animation in this cartoon is pretty good. Voice acting is okay, too. However, this cartoon lacks a compeling storyline, and my interest in this cartoon faded quickly. The humor of this cartoon is almost non-existant, in my oppinion. The only thing that made me laugh was the words on the side of the X-Ray machine. If you are going to make more cartoons, I suggest you try and work on your storyline. Other than that, keep up the good work.
I feel so dirty.
My eyes are on fire! Blam it before it's too late! Oh...the pain.
One of the Best
This movie was truely one of the best I've ever seen.
Thanks :D
Not Bad
This movie isn't bad at all. I think it's kinda cool. Keep up the good work.
Good Work
Once again, you guys have made a masterpiece. You should all treat yourselves to frosty, milk shakes. And maybe a few tacos.
I can't stop playing videogames!!!
Age 38, Male
Graphic Designer
Hoffman Estates, IL
Joined on 1/14/03